From my point of view, it is more enjoyable to work for three days with long hours than working five days in a week because one can have more time to relax and can focus the work better.
To start with, working only three days in a week provides you to have four days off from work which you can share that time with your loved ones. To be more specific, people need to pay attention to their relationships to keep them live. We have many different relationships outside of work, such as family and close friends. If someone has only two days off from work, there is not enough time for everybody. For example, I work for five days in a busy hospital in New Jersey. There are three shifts to work in hospitals, day, evening and overnight. My working hours are three to eleven on evenings which makes me available only in morning time to see my friends. However, my closest friend works for day time in another place in New York. When we want to see each other we literally need to make an appointment at least three or two weeks before. Even though we are off on the same weekend every two weeks, I usually have plans with my family on that time. On the other hand, if I work for three days only, I can have extra time to see my friend and my family together. A recent study has revealed that people who work less days have a better social life.
Another point to consider is that when you work for long hours you can focus more to your work. What I mean is that, when one is able to stay at work for long hours, she or he can see things in detail. If you stay only seven hours in your workplace, you might be in a rush to finish your work. For instance, my niece works in a hospital as a nurse in New Jersey. Her regular schedule is always three days in a week for twelve hours. She says that she has time to go through all the information in a patient file. Besides, she mentioned that she is able to have a conversation with every patient she is taking care of. That long hours make her to be available to get all the information about patient's complains which she can provide quality healthcare for her patients. A survey which is conducted in a university hospital has shown that patients feel better when they are taking care of by the same person for long hours.
To sum up, for reasons discussed above, I believe that working only three days with long hours gives you extra time with your family and friends, and makes you more focused to work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...elationships to keep them live. We have many different relationships outside of work, such as ...
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Line 3, column 1122, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun days is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...study has revealed that people who work less days have a better social life. Anot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, at least, for example, for instance, i mean, such as, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27194860814 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17080143983 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430406852248 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1758490435 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7391304348 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3043478261 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34782608696 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465667711162 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15873154297 0.076458572812 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111561107124 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354945879601 0.150856017488 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573927974791 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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