With the increasing rate of development in societies, Internet access and public transportation are two of the major parts that government can spend money. Some people say that it is a better idea to invest money on public transportation, while the others believe that internet access is worth more. From my point of view, I deeply believe that governments should invest more money on internet access but never cut subsidize of public transportation.
First, internet access provides new gateways to transfer money. Indeed, people living all around the world could transfer their money through internet access. Take my father experience as an example. My father told me about the difficulties he had whenever he wanted to transfer money around thirty years ago. Long queues, crowded places, wasted time are only some terrible features of old method. However, by emergence of internet access this procedure only takes few second and the money would transfer in a fracture of second.
Second, internet access provides a solid foundation for new money-making method. Actually, nowadays' people are able to buy and sell company share through online platforms and this would help them to increase their income. For instance, I am hardworking trader who earn each month more than 10000 dollars. Hence, new money making methods is another feature of in internet access.
However, I am not a proponent of cutting transportation supports. In each country, public transportation is the first choice of people who commutes daily to their jobs. For instance, last year the governments of Tehran subsidized new supports to bus transportation. The plan aimed to increases the number of busses to reduce people from being late. As a results, people came happy with this plan and also the usage of private car declined tremendously. So, public transportation must be supported but not as much as internet access.
Finally, internet access provides new payment and purchasing methods. For instance, my grandmother told me about problems they encountered when they want to pay their bills like water or electricity bills, or when they wanted to buy a products. Today, this procedure has been facilitated by internet access. There are a bunch of online shops such as Amazon and EBay which offer special offers to their costumer.
All in all, as the above-mentioned examples have illustrated, internet access and public transportation are both indispensable parts of our society and both should be supported based on their values. Internet access reduces time taking procedure of money transfer and proposes new payment method and also new job opportunities. However, public transportation should be in the focal point since they play an important role in people's daily life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun second seems to be countable; consider using: 'few seconds'.
Suggestion: few seconds
...ternet access this procedure only takes few second and the money would transfer in a fract...
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Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'increase'.
Suggestion: increase
...o bus transportation. The plan aimed to increases the number of busses to reduce people f...
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Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...es to reduce people from being late. As a results, people came happy with this plan and a...
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Line 9, column 234, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a product' or simply 'products'?
Suggestion: a product; products
...icity bills, or when they wanted to buy a products. Today, this procedure has been facilit...
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Line 9, column 321, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bunches'?
Suggestion: bunches
...litated by internet access. There are a bunch of online shops such as Amazon and EBay...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, so, while, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2332.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86852036613 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536363636364 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5942995805 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6923076923 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337942958595 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994459145941 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792810763782 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183532936097 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082491962101 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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