It is more important at a job that you enjoy, even if the salary is low, Than it is to have a high-paying job that you do not enjoy.
Everyone want to enjoy their life but sometimes they have to live life according to the situations. Sometimes situations do not help them to do what they want to do. Everyone have goals, hobies, dreams but some can achieve their dreams but others can not. Some do their work in their interests but others have to do according to the situations. Some have to concentrate on money by leaving aside their dreams and hobbies.
I support that it is more important to have a high-paying job that you do not enjoy than to work at a job that you enjoy,even if the salary is low. In today's world money is a major factor. We can not live happily if we do not have enough wealth. We have to compromise with our choices,living standards
or sometimes dreams also. If we are working in a high paying job, we have so many benefits. We can live life easily without worrying about money factor. Our living standard will be high. We can use many facilities. We can save more amount moeny more future. We can also invest some money in mutual funds or share market. We do not have to compromise on dreams due to money. Consider the case, if one is enjoying doing painting. So he/she decided to be a drawing teacher.But he/she is not getting enough money Other he/she does not like engineering but he/she decided to do it for bright future and he/she gets job in high-paying company. Life is beautiful for both but second one does not have to worry about money. If we are not interest in a work but we have to do. We can do whatever our hobbies in free time. We can also do on weekends to make also money from them. Some times working in not interested field feels like tedious but we have to do due to other benefits. So people continue their work if they are not enjoying. They start finding way to make
it interesting or rather they start to loving their work and do hardwork in them. If our salary is low but we are enjoying than it is good in view of happiness. We are satisfied with our work that we are doing what we have dreamed. But we always have to worry about money. Money becomes major worry in our day to day life. We can't invest much money for future.
According to me, it is better to work at high paying job if we are not enjoying it because it has so many benefits. We can other works in free time which we are enjoying. We can start taking interest in our job and make it enjoyable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s,living standards or sometimes dreams also. If we are working in a high paying job...
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...can save more amount moeny more future. We can also invest some money in mutual fu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31333333333 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34379559215 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.384444444444 0.524837075471 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.699181904 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.8181818182 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6363636364 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.757575757576 5.45110844103 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273753233127 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873134956004 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159945060433 0.0737576698707 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220641881261 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180704083244 0.0645574589148 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.