**** It is more important to keep old friends rather than to make new friends
Flower and barb exist in the same place. Likewise, it is a hard nut to crack to unearth the exact solution of the above statement as it seems like a coin that has two different sides, which is why people should weigh pros and cons before jumping to conclusions. So it is clear that every statement has demand of deliberation to substantiate whether it is wrong or right. In the similar manner it is very onerous to tell whether making new friends is wise or not. In respect of it I do believe that as friendship is momentous of our civic life so new horizon derided by them obviously an asset. That’s why I opine in the positive response of making new friends.
To embark on, association is a must in order to embellish our student as well as job life. Similarly if we make new friends it will add our enjoyment in a multiple progression. Here it is referable that I am not talking of discarding old and genuine friend, rather we should focus to create new ones along with them. What I mean by this is that certainly new association will work in our life in enormous directions. Take for instance; when I trod my legs into USA in the Boston University for my graduation, all environments were fresh and novel to me. In that moment it was a vague subsistence everywhere that pained me a lot. As I am a past lover, so I invariably recollected the memory of my ole friends. However with the passage of time I discovered myself that I had to be extrovert, otherwise to make group project or being a cosmopolitan guy were not possible. That’s why I everyday mixed with Australian, American, Nigerian, Indian students in a planned way. After that, within a week they cordially accepted me and then it was very cozy to perform all home works and assignments. Additionally by dint of their association I was able to perceive my innovativeness and creativity in the heat transfer field work which is really valuable to me .
Furthermore, a new friend carries weight of extensive elements in our life. It helps us to be familiarizing to new culture, language, notions etc. For example, in the foreign land I met a lot of friends who were Christian, Hindu, French, and Australian. So their cultures, behavior, food habits all were known to me. No doubt it is a one kind of gaining huge knowledge. Even if one of friend, Eric we always went to Hudson River to enjoy the sunset. At that moment we shared our views of cultural and language aspects.
Last but not least, a new friend seems like a catalyst in our life. Obviously we have to admit old ones will remain inside of us but if we create new ones we will get many conveniences by them. For instance, if my friend is an advocate, he will help me in case of land case. Besides if my new friend is a professor of a varisty, surely he will me if I face any kind academic problems in my life. From my personal experience, my foreign friend Bkely was a research assistant of a company where I went for some chores. But matter of regret is that I forgot to take my credentials, so no sooner the company had driven me out than my friend assisted.
To wrap it up, it is very strenuous to provide the unique solution of such a contradictory aspect. Although some may oppose my purview, it is lucid to discern the logic of the above mentioned which can conclude the response in an exact manner. Virtually, friendship is not bought by cash rather it is earned by stealing the heart of others. As our area of association is more, so perimeter of new friendship should be made more then we will eventually get the outmost assistance everywhere in this world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ellish our student as well as job life. Similarly if we make new friends it will add our ...
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...collected the memory of my ole friends. However with the passage of time I discovered m...
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...perform all home works and assignments. Additionally by dint of their association I was able...
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... driven me out than my friend assisted. To wrap it up, it is very strenuous to p...
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...ntioned which can conclude the response in an exact manner. Virtually, friendship is not bought by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, really, similarly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i mean, kind of, no doubt, talking of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 91.0 43.0788530466 211% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 91.0 52.1666666667 174% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2953.0 1977.66487455 149% => OK
No of words: 656.0 407.700716846 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50152439024 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06087906887 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76412356893 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 334.0 212.727598566 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509146341463 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 954.9 618.680645161 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4215326686 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8529411765 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247476580107 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607406393192 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706492344524 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136334883105 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364330653023 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 86.8835125448 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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