I hold this believe that working slowly with less errors still has it's value thus, may say that I disagree with the statement. Though, working fast nowadays is important and lots of employers look for people who are able to work fast and make fast decisions but working slowly has benefits like higher quality, less unreversable mistakes and prevents wastage of time and resources.
First and formost, The quality is something that people are constanly following. Mistakes are always nerve racking and customer keep look for the products that they are asure that has the adequate and enough quality. For instance, we can talk about apple products. Apple became the secound largest tech company in 2018 under the shade of it's highly professional and exquisit products. This compony has won all of it's rivals in th battle field which is it's customers minds. The bugs in other smart phones has made people all to change their minds and find other brands.
Secondly, we can't always reverse and make our mistakes correct. Sometimes it is small things that prevent the whole projet from failiour. working sperficialy, not condering all the possible problems and predicting the potential errors can cause in tremendouse disasters. A case in point, in my country a dam project was going on. In order to finishing the project before ellection for the mare, they didn't investigate the conditions of the position of it as well as they should have been. Consequently, after finishing the project they figured out that they had made the dam on an extrmely salty ground which caused in making the freshwater briny. They still haven't figured out a way to solve the issue.
At last, the real money in this competitive era is time and mistakes often end up wasting a huge amount of it. Imagine an employer handing over a job to an indivitual to finish it then after getting the results comes to the understading that it has lots of mistakes and it is litterly not practical. Accordingly, the time spended by both the employee and the boss for revising the project was for nothing. Therefore, I think I have made my point that working carefully with more concentration is something that is more appreciated than just simply finishing it.
In conclution, working in peace doesn't necessarily mean not meeting the deadlines. It means that projects and jobs should be spended as much time as they needed neither less nor more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
I hold this believe that working slowly with less errors st...
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Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun errors is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...d this believe that working slowly with less errors still has its value thus, may sa...
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Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'nerved'.
Suggestion: nerved
...onstanly following. Mistakes are always nerve racking and customer keep look for the ...
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Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'secound the largest'.
Suggestion: secound the largest
... about apple products. Apple became the secound largest tech company in 2018 under the shade of...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s and find other brands. Secondly, we cant always reverse and make our mistakes co...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Working
...prevent the whole projet from failiour. working sperficialy, not condering all the poss...
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Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ect before ellection for the mare, they didnt investigate the conditions of the posit...
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Line 3, column 660, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...making the freshwater briny. They still havent figured out a way to solve the issue. ...
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Line 4, column 204, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'results'' or 'result's'?
Suggestion: results'; result's
...ual to finish it then after getting the results comes to the understading that it has l...
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Line 4, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reciated than just simply finishing it. In conclution, working in peace doesnt n...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... it. In conclution, working in peace doesnt necessarily mean not meeting the deadli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, as for, for instance, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88997555012 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5598613336 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569682151589 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0406375059 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2380952381 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4761904762 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09523809524 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210679299484 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495204903215 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711858633224 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112444953003 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806256440896 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.