It is the responsibility of the government to provide health care to everyone living in that country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Good health and well-being is demonstrated in sustainable development of 2020 which is priority goal of every nation. It is obvious that government must care for their population health because development of country is always belonged with their inhabitants. Especially, in poor county with famine, person’s health is essential and being though problem in worldwide. So it seems like if they ensure them free health they will live happy but in I think it is not sustainable verdict to make them live peacefully. It is about country strategy and government far-sighted consideration. As well as, I am fully contrasted the statement of government should provide health care. Right below there is my three reasons to support my idea.
Firstly, Mongolia where I live is one of developing country also like other countries, we have some problem that where should the budget distributed. Furthermore, for instance, it is substantial that developing country should focus on their factory and production, but if we spend most money on our people health the balance will inequality. Correspondingly, to preserve propel budget balance, I think we do not need to provide free health care to everyone.
Secondly, imagine that you worked whole day to get the cash which was for your tuition then your friend ask for money. Your kindness will insist you to give but what if they don’t understand how hard you work to earn that money, and what if they keep asking you that you have to give them. It is an example of free health care, that’s how people react. As a result, people would not care their own health, they will act like that their illness is the result of poor care of government and they don’t know how much the money spent on health. Thus, it is better to not prove health care.
Lastly, I am general college student who studies four year to get bachelor degree. But, Have you every count how many years do health of science student study to be professional doctor? It takes at least 6 years to get bachelor degree after that 2 years intern, then 2 years on the major they choose so, in total 10 years!. Identically, they pay an expensive tuition also. What am I trying to say is, I know most doctors who work in public hospital never paid enough. They salary is as same as regular accouter so we have to appreciate the doctor who study long period for us by paying more money for helps us to heal illness.
In conclusion, why do our health is belonged with government? Why don’t we care our health by ourselves? These three examples denying the idea that government should provide health care to people in their country.
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as for, at least, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81578947368 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66911461395 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517543859649 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.102075411 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22426981251 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736422397588 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675299810214 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140497707139 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086583907776 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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