A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time.
These days, excursion is trendy, and most people place great emphasis on it. Some people prefer to do a job with more vacation time, even though it provides a low salary. As far as I am concerned, I strongly disagree with such notion. As money is necessary for buying convenient things in people’s lives, I believe that working with a high income but less holiday is better. This essay will provide further aspects and examples to support this idea in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, money allows people to live comfortably. Most indispensable things such as houses or foods are valuable. Moreover, people also spend a lot of money on traveling too. For this reason, individuals should work for acquiring a large amount of salary before they concern about their vacation time. I can attest this from my own experience; My father worked at the company paid a high salary but had only one long-term holiday per year. Therefore, when my family excursion abroad, we spend a lot for having a splendid family’s trip, consuming good foods, and rooming at the best hotels. Although we have not many chances to travel, each trip extremely fulfills our life.
Secondly, another fact that supports my standpoint is that money is veritable to help individuals in unexpected situations. As humans usually face an ailment and accident, they should spare their cash for those critical cases. To illustrate this, a majority of teenagers today desires to travel to many places around the world. According to the research from Harvard University in Boston, individuals aged twenty-five to thirty have a trend to pay for vacationing abroad rather than save them for an emergency. Therefore, this group has a low-savings rate and tends to have dept problems. If they decide to work for high income more and decrease their traveling, they will have savings for their urgent medical fees.
In conclusion, I firmly prefer to work in a high-salary profession with less vacation time. This is due to the fact that money is significant for comfortable living and paying their unpredicted fees.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08645533141 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73770059105 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622478386167 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2798362376 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.35 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236129452953 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685401514008 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120051618529 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170231557843 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987076914311 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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