Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States. Name another world leader you think is important.
Give specific reasons and examples for your choice.
There are many leaders who worked hard for their people and does not care about the hardships from which they suffer. In modern era, I have not seen such personalities. All over the globe, as a lot of countries are presented on map that is why everyone have its own choice for leader. My favourite leader is Mathma Gandi. In this essay I intend to put forth my points and reason of support.
First, he was the man of the tough rules and it applies to all with no exceptions, even it some to his family rules remain constant. He made numerous sacrifices for the prosperity of country. For instance, I have not seen him in real but my mother and books told me about it. In 90s just after the world war, people were homeless and no food to eat at that time he stood up start the organization to feed poor and refugee. In addition, he never cared about what religion they belong or what culture they follow, the thing that matter was all were human beings, even though he involved his sister to take care of the orphan children. Thus, this example elucidates that rules are very significant.
Secondly, the main error at that time was the education because without education no community can further go forward in the race of life. For example, he made educational institute for everyone, although its a girl or boy no discrimination were made. He awakes the people to educate their children otherwise we can not grow and after some time anyone can easily takeover us. Therefore, this example illustrates that education is the essential part of our life.
Third, Gandhi wrote many books for people so they can gain some knowledge, but in start multitude individuals were sarcastic to him but with time every thing settles down. To exemplify, his books became the world best selling and he got the noble price on his famous book the stars.
In my opinion, no one will born like him finish his life for the sake of society or country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57636887608 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41152696426 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585014409222 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2678993147 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2777777778 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130337875925 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465363119678 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356892314716 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747414051443 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489983717306 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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