Leaders like John F Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States Name another world leader you think is important Give specific reasons and examples for your choice

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Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States. Name another world leader you think is important.
Give specific reasons and examples for your choice.

There are various leader in the world which had made great contributions for people and made a world better place for them. In my opinion, the most significant leader of all time for was Allama Iqbal. He was also known as Poet of the East. In the following essay I intend to put forth my points to support my view.

To begin with, Allama Iqbal gave people a sense of self awarness and willingness. This was a great hope for the Muslims of sub-continent as it was arduous time for these people. The concept of self-awarness brought a change in the Muslims of sub-continent . They started to fight back for their legal rights which diminished the Hindu tyranny over the Muslims. To exemplify, Muslims were in minority and they did not have legal right to sit the parliament. Allama Iqbal fought for them and provided them with equal rights as of the majority. This would not have been possible without the guidance of a great leader.

In addition, he guided the people to seek knowledge and education and he made great contributions in writing literature. His poems and poetry were also an inspiration. In one of his speech he addressed people that they should have to make their own decision now if they did not do so, others will take decision for them which will eventually they had to follow. These words inspire people to seek knowledge so they secure better future of them. For instance, when Muslims got their new homeland Pakistan, he made a University for them which was named after him. In that University he provided students with best knowledge in various subject and languages. Moreover, for Allama Iqbal students and educated youth are the backbone of country which provides huge support to a country's prosperity. For this reason, he contributed plenty for them.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80456026059 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58663963235 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517915309446 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7417061985 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6315789474 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1578947368 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152034309351 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517904089259 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609234655853 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118823275993 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406499975776 0.0645574589148 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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