Imagine that your city government has given permission for a major company to build a large factory near your neighborhood Do you think this is a good idea Why or why not Explain your position using specific reasons and examples

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Imagine that your city government has given permission for a major company to build a large factory near your neighborhood. Do you think this is a good idea? Why or why not? Explain your position using specific reasons and examples

There is a long debate over whether construction of a factory in a neighborhood is a good idea or not. In my opinion, I do not think it is great notion to build a large factory in our residential area. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points to support my view.

To begin with, construction of an industry in a neighborhood results in urban sprawl which means it diminishes the quality of life in our area. As factories play an important role for the country's economy. However, presence of a factory in a residential area reduces the beauty of that area. People in our neighborhood chose to live a calm and quiet life. Therefore, with the construction of a factory this would not be possible. For instance, our family recently shifted from the New york city to the long Island because it is quite and peaceful area. The city life was awful because of there were offices, factories, and all working companies in between the residential area. For this reason, there was always rush and noise all day like constructions, machines whirring and traffic noises. Therefore, building of a factory in could results in same thing.

In addition, construction of factory in a residential area can causes health related problem. Usually the smoke and waste matters from a factory can lead to environmental pollution. In a residential areas there are no proper sewerage system for the factories disposal where they could dump garbage. Also, smokes from factories when directly inhaled by people it can leads to respiratory issues like asthma or lungs cancer. For instance, according to research of 2019 our town of Harrison had two out of ten children have autism. This is because there were various factories in which dispose their garbage in the river and that river water was used for drinking purpose. Even after it is purified traces of harmful chemical were left in it which caused these problems. As a results, I oppose the plan of building a factory in our neighborhood.

In conclusion, I do not think it is good idea to allow building a factory near a residential area. This is because, it leads to urban sprawl, and because it can causes serious health issue.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
...erefore, building of a factory in could results in same thing. In addition, constru...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...on of factory in a residential area can causes health related problem. Usually the smo...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'area'?
Suggestion: area
...vironmental pollution. In a residential areas there are no proper sewerage system for...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'factories'' or 'factory's'?
Suggestion: factories'; factory's
...e are no proper sewerage system for the factories disposal where they could dump garbage...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...factories disposal where they could dump garbage. Also, smokes from factories whe...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
... when directly inhaled by people it can leads to respiratory issues like asthma or lu...
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Message: “Even after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er water was used for drinking purpose. Even after it is purified traces of harmful chemic...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...t in it which caused these problems. As a results, I oppose the plan of building a factor...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...ads to urban sprawl, and because it can causes serious health issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80585106383 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76512748391 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51329787234 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5537016094 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1363636364 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172205626774 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573566452565 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501806124954 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125406856041 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259177828707 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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