People born with different desires. Some obsses with power and leadership, while some obsses with expanding the frontiers of sciene and so on. A host of people like to be in center of the power and be the one who decide, indeed they love to be leader. Meanwhile, there is a controvesial debate over whether this prowess comes natrally or people can obtain it during their lives. I personally belive that we can learn how to be a pefect leader. I have some reason supporting my opinion, two of which will be explored in following paragraphes.
First and foremost, experience plays a salient role in leadership. While we are young, if we work besides people who have a great ability of leadership, we can learn much from him. We can observe the most pragmatic approaches he utilized in critical situations. It can help us in the right moment when its our turn to decide. In other words, an astute learner take advantage of every second spends besides a real leader. Lately I read an interview of a prosperous manager of a company; he asserted that when he started to work as an apprentice, he was timid even to ask a question. He got paralyzed whenever he needed to select among two little options. Gradually, he stated that he recognized that he needs to follow the procedure which his boss accomplished. He start to observe his behaviors thorughly and start to imitate his workstyle painstakingly. In his opinion, it was his secret of success. He became a successful leader because he worked beside a true leader.
Moreover, there are a lot of sources in which we can find proper information about how to be a good leader. People can use various of books, internet contents and websites such as youtube to learn the latent secrets of being a leader. A wide range of relavant information are accessible easily in this modern days. So, people can freely follow their desire and learn as much as they can by finding a reliable source. As an instance, recently I start to watch a talkshow in youtube in which a prosperous buisnessman invites some of the great leader of our era. They talk about their most intimate approaches and descions which help them to thrive in this competitive world. By watching this talkshow, I learn a lot about the way I can be a great leader.
In conclusion, although some aspects of being a leader are the ones people born with it, there are lots of others way based of which people can obtain this ability and become a good leader.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 302, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...It can help us in the right moment when its our turn to decide. In other words, an ...
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Line 2, column 764, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'starts'.
Suggestion: starts
...ocedure which his boss accomplished. He start to observe his behaviors thorughly and ...
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Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... which a prosperous buisnessman invites some of the great leader of our era. They talk abou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65137614679 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65496091113 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504587155963 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1728313138 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.12 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.44 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223357986758 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065387490287 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748151909096 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156969215548 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644423701216 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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