Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today is yesterday’s future, but also is tomorrow’s past in the same time. If the sense of time passing make human live in a hurry to benefit every present moment, forward and dream about the future, learning about the past helps us understand ourselves, come over troubles and have a meaningful life.
First of all, the past provides us a context from which to understand ourselves in the present. Learning about artifacts, for instance, helps us discover the mystery about the beginning of human life. Then, we knows our first human ancestors appeared between 5 million and 7 million years ago; they used to live in caves, hunt and gather for foods, or live in herds to protect themselves away from danger, as well as the immigrations of human, the formation of civilizations, and the developing of cultures, …Through learning history, we will realize the present is the accumulation of events, plans, decisions done in the past… So, to really understand where we are in life, to locate our positions and roles in the flow of history, it is crucial to actually know what our ancestors did and why.
Additionally, the past can be a great teacher and sources of wisdom. The life time of a person only can last just about 100 years, but history is accumulated from generations to generations for millions of years. Pervious people wrote their experiences and knowledge, and left us priceless sources of information to explore the world. Besides of learning about the history or experiences from other people, looking back about our own past also help us to complete ourselves in the present. For example, in front of some directions which can change our lives, we sometimes feel in trouble, stuck or confuse. Thinking about the failures we experienced, and our origin goals we set in the past can help us make a wiser decision, and avoid making similar mistakes.
Furthermore, learning about the past teach us appreciate the present. As I mentioned, what we have today is resulted from previous events in the past. The past also teaches us each person is not a single individual, but hidden in he is his culture which connect closely to social, and is continued from many generations. Understanding the past, we understand the meaning of our ancestors’ sacrifice for us. Specifically, being a Vietnamese, living in a country which experienced many wars for nation defense, we keep our heads down in gratitude with people who devoted their lives to protect the country, as well as appreciate people who keep the peace today. Thus, we also feel more appreciate the value of present life and spend it more meaningful. Without knowing what happened in the past, unintentionally, we become ungrateful people.
In conclusion, the past hold so much information, so much wisdom, and so much value that we cannot ever accumulate in our whole life time. Learning about the past does not mean dwelling on or reside excessively in it, but revise it, learn from it for living a better life in the present.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Through
...tions, and the developing of cultures, …Through learning history, we will realize the p...
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...reat teacher and sources of wisdom. The life time of a person only can last just about 10...
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... we cannot ever accumulate in our whole life time. Learning about the past does not mean ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'as well as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206132879046 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.151618398637 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0715502555366 0.0866891130778 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0596252129472 0.046263068375 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.076660988075 0.0685040099705 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126064735945 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0340715502555 0.0351676179071 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86153245687 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0204429301533 0.0309702414327 66% => OK
Particles: 0.00340715502555 0.00188951952338 180% => OK
Determiners: 0.0817717206133 0.0887237588012 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0102214650767 0.0209618222197 49% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0187393526405 0.0139019557991 135% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3023.0 2387.08602151 127% => OK
No of words: 508.0 408.028673835 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95078740157 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32874015748 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267716535433 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181102362205 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120078740157 0.112833075102 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86153245687 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507874015748 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 60.3570731624 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.4 20.5533526081 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 113.814970456 48.84282405 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.15 120.699889404 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.5533526081 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 0.644075263715 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 52.1716535433 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.27218934911 1.45489161554 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423052978393 0.300154397459 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102618266537 0.103427244359 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0496492228985 0.0752933317313 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.54922278647 0.497263757937 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136405282436 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190800635371 0.114077575197 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076932225987 0.0781384742642 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.458563036215 0.336927656856 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0810889010156 0.067059652881 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306618074501 0.210909579961 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472428268564 0.0618886996521 76% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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