Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were child
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Each person facing life difficulties during his life. Whether these are taken place in the past or in recent days. But most people believed that the people in these decades live in most comfortable and ease condition than in the past. I personally agree with them for several reasons that I will explore in this essay.
To begin with, the advent of modern life technology reduces time consuming in achieving our tasks. Todays the presence of electricity makes our chores much easier and done faster than in the past. For instance, my grand-mother uses to spend many hours in preparing the food every day. Today I can do the same meals with less effort and time because of advent of speedy food-maker. This machine is turn on by electricity which was not invented at my grandmother time. Furthermore, the presence of dishwasher which that can washing the dishes by its own if we program the timer and heater and after one hour we can found every things are done by bottom press. The list is long, many new technological machines that make our tasks easy and faster. Technology plays a crucial role in our days and has a huge positive impact on our lives.
In addition, the conduction of many researches enhances our life standard and welfare. In the past, the health quality was very low. This because of no researches conducted in medical fields which in turn, lead to high mortality rates. Today the advent of many vaccines reduces the mortality rate and increases the percentage of healthy f born babies. My grandfather is a good example of this, He died by chicken pox. At this past time there was no vaccine invented to prevent and reduce the death percentage from this disease. Today and thanks for the researchers make this possible and many family live happily without thinking od loss another person from their members as it was happened in the past. Without these invention we almost loss many of our lovers every day and even every hours.
In conclusion, the pace of our lives become more easily because of the advent of new technology that reduce our hard works and increase our welfare and life quality besides the researches that cure and prevent many malicious diseases . Today the life difficulties almost become varnish away in our days which we should be thankful to all reasons that makes it true.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78855721393 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45433118078 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0690901965 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124869232386 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384125228898 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390586785353 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795008533527 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00717253526895 0.0645574589148 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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