Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children
It is undeniable that life today is a huge difference from it used to be half a century ago. The advent of technology has brought numerous changes to human's lite. Some people believe that people in today's world enjoy a more manageable and relaxed life than when grandparents were kids. However, in my opinion, modern life is, in fact, harsher for most people than in the past.
First of all, busier life leads to more stress than ever. People at present lead a more hectic life as their daily schedule are usually filled with work and social activities from early morning until late evening. Overtime working has become common as everyone strives to survive the competition at the workplace and increase their promotion chance. Additionally, while technological advancement enhance communication in many favorable aspects, they made people more accessible. It seems that they are put under strains of work and left with little spare time for relaxation. An illustration is my sister who usually has to work until midnight to reach her KPI goal every month. Even during weekends and holidays, my sisters often receives a call from her office and has to deal with something while on her vacation. Sometimes, she even has to leave early for some emergency at work. Although she works hard, receives a handsome salary, and gets promoted earlier than her colleagues, she is not happy because she always has to cope with a great deal of pressure and has no time for leisure.
Furthermore, relationships among humans, which is essential to one's life, have deteriorated compared to half a century ago. Hard-pressed life makes meetings between friends and family members hard to arrange since everyone is busy with their own work and life. My sister and I, as always occupied with her job, can hardly join the family dinner as we used to like before. In addition, development of social networking sites has led people to place more emphasis on virtual life rather than real life. People communicate through their posts, likes and comments on sites like Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter rather through face-to-face conversation. For example, when I and my mom visited a coffee shop last week, we saw a group of friends sitting together but not talking to each other. Everyone was sticking to their smartphones, texting or surfing the Internet. My mom complained to me about that and said that in the past, people had rare chance to gather but every time they got together, everybody chatted and talked a lot to each other. All in all, relationships, which plays a pivotal part in human's life, appear to worsen as time passes.
In conclusion, to my view, life nowadays is more difficult than it was when our grandfathers and grandmothers were children. Life was more tiring and stressful and relationships among people are also not as good as they used to be. I believe that people should try to spend an amount of time on resting as well as being around family members and friend
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2479.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 504.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91865079365 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64745818927 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 784.8 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7173189919 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.16 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.16 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229020332853 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678538876987 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944069766734 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175092377206 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865010164642 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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