Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily
Relationship is always complex and therefore a matter of multiple heated debates, one of which relation to the number of friends. Some people think that people are happier if they can keep their friendship with a few friends only but for a long time. Others, on the other hand, of the opinion that the capability of opening the social circles is more important to one's mental life. To my view, being able to make new friends is more beneficial to one's happiness.
First of all, this skill is advantageous for one's adaptation to a new environment, which often causes a plethora of strains. When people move to a strange workplace, neighborhood or school, many feel anxious because they do not know any one there. However, if they can make new acquaintances easily, their stress will be substantially relieved. In the modern world, everything is more mobile than ever, people have to change their company, university or neighborhood quite often, even when they try to avoid it. Therefore, if they know how to socialize with everyone, they will rarely cope with any worry or pressure related to this problem and lead a more blissful life than those who are less amiable.
In addition, a large social network is more interesting and enjoyable. People learn a lot from their friend through their sharing of knowledge and experience. They might know about different aspects of life, some of which they are not even keen on, because their friends keep talking about. As a result, the more friends one have, the more he or she can learn. For example, my friend is genius in making friends and she has relationships with people coming from all walks of life. Every time I talk to her, I feel that she has insight in many things, ranging from travelling, cuisine, culture, history, music, sports to politics. She said that all of her knowledge came from conversations with friends working in those fields and it felt like experiencing new things everyday. I can understand how refreshing it is to listen to stories in various areas like that.
Some opponents of this idea claims that keeping a bond with small number of friends but for a long time is much better because people can only share their stories with close friends and are usually afraid of revealing them to new ones. Only sharing things can make people more joy in life. This can be valid to some extent. However, supporters of this view might have mistaken the concept old friends with close friends. It is not necessary to become close only after a long period of contact. Some friends can be best friends forever and share everything with each other even after a few weeks or months. Furthermore, to find best friends depends a lot on the destiny, whether one can find his or her soul mate. In fact, making new friends increases the chance people can find their true best friends
In conclusion, I think that that being able to make new friends contribute more to one pleasure in life. Many people are frightened when trying open their network. Nevertheless, I think they should overcome this fear to meet new people and achieve more joy in life.
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...y feel anxious because they do not know any one there. However, if they can make new ac...
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...nd it felt like experiencing new things everyday. I can understand how refreshing it is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, talking about, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2576.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 539.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77922077922 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5090512898 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47866419295 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.9 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4910111864 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4074074074 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.962962963 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14814814815 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269015890259 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799917285775 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597179050438 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169440344019 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353196990941 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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