Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Some people believe that in the past, our grandparents had a smooth and uncomplicated life and often refer to the past as “the good old days.” They lived clean lives and developed deep relationships. However, life has changed in so many ways in the last fifty years. I believe that our lives are easier and more comfortable today for three important reasons.
First, transportation is totally different from how it was in the past. Now, there are faster and more reliable cars. University students use cars to commute every day, making their commute efficient and convenient for them. For example, my older child commutes from our house to the university by car every day. In the past, my grandparents had to take buses to make the same trip, wasting more time getting from one place to another. Furthermore, we travel on well-maintained roads that make our commute pleasurable. No one can argue that changes in transportation haven’t made life better.
In addition to improvements in transportation, domestic responsibilities are more efficient because of new developments. Modern houses are equipped with many convenient appliances. Washing machines, dryers, dishwashers, and vacuum cleaners make housework fast and convenient. In contrast, during my childhood, I remember my grandparents spending a long time after dinner washing and drying the dishes by hand. It is clear that these devices have improved our lives.
Finally, with the advent of technology, life has improved for the better. Computers and the internet could be named as the most important developments in the last few years. These new technologies made life easier at different levels. First, they have made it simple to access information. For example, in the past, in order to do homework, children went to the library, or they had an encyclopedia to consult at home. In contrast, children these days use the internet if they need to search for any information to complete homework. These practices allow them not only to save time but also find the latest available information on specific topics without leaving their home.
In conclusion, life has changed for the better. Innovations in transportation, devices for the home, and access to data have offered us ease that our grandparents never enjoyed. I hope that we will not forget to cultivate relationships like our ancestors did with all the free time that these changes have brought.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1887755102 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99470238905 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566326530612 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0445353595 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.36 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.68 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147196427688 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403057502994 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046791551184 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791787736663 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438421611588 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.