traveling alone or with a companion

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traveling alone or with a companion

Both traveling alone and traveling with a partner have advantages and disadvantages. The former people can manage their time as well as the places where they want to visit; however, travel alone could be expensive, boring, and unsafe. Contrary, the latter people can spend time and live new experiences with someone else and be cheaper and safer. If I were to choose one, I would like to choose the latter for many reasons.

First and foremost, people who are planning a trip have to take into consideration the security. It is a fact that people who travel with a companion have more opportunities to face and solve problems than people who travel alone. For example, I went to Italy last year with a friend. Throughout the trip, we rented a car. Unfortunately, one day, the vehicle broke up in the middle of the road, but my friend knew how to fix it up because he learned mechanical skills with his uncle. His knowledge was so useful, and we could continue our trip; otherwise, I would be in a huge issue if I have been alone.

Second, when the budget is a little tight, traveling with a friend can save a lot of money. Moreover, having extra money can be used for something else, such as additional expenses that we never thought to do. Drawing from my own experience, saving money on food, hotels, and tickets allowed me to use this extra money on unpredictable things. For instance, I had to buy new clothes and bags because my flight lost my baggage. It was possible since I had saved money traveling with a friend.

Finally, one of the most important things in traveling is to enjoy every moment during the trip. In my case, this is possible only if I am sharing and spending time with someone else because the loneliness is a tough one. In other words, the times I made a journey alone, I felt annoyed and bored. Therefore, If I am thinking of doing a new incursion, I always look for a friend to have the best travel ever.

In conclusion, every person knows if they want to travel alone or with someone else. However, I am totally convinced that a friend's journey has more benefits than negatives aspects such as saving money, sharing great experiences, and the most important is having a safe trip.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59697732997 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5669743292 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544080604534 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8866949618 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9047619048 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309552774388 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958087553414 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122178621417 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16936086434 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579118565428 0.0645574589148 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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