Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
No one can deny that there are positive and negatives aspect about leave home. Some people believe that it is better go away early. However, there are other people agree with the statement that it is better stay at home more time. In my case, If I were forced to choose one, I would like to stay at home with my family for three reasons: expenses, wages and household chores, and I will develop these reasons in the following paragraphs.
First of all, leaving home imply a huge responsibility. More specifically when we talk about expenses to affort. There are some people that think this is an opportunity for younger people to learn about how it is life. This statement in part it is true, but I disagree, and I prefer to wait a little more time to face this stage of life. I believe that living more time with parents as much as possible people can will save money. Thus, young people can use this money to begin facing life with more stability.
Second, wages is another issue that young people have to face in order to leave houses parent. In other words, incomes sometimes are much less than outcomes. Surely, there are people who think this is an opportunity to them for starting to handle money. This could be true, but I believe through those time younger people have to stay not only focus on their jobs, but also on their goals, and it is not time to add more concerns in their life as to think how they have to handle a house cash flow. In my case, when I left my parent house I was so much yuong, and I had to pay my study loan. It was so hard to affort those time that If I were to advice some yuong gay, I would like to tell him that it it better wait a little more living with parent than increase more responsabilities on their lifes.
Finally, the last concern that a young person have to think is about household chores. It seems an simply subjet. However, in order to live alone, people have to do so many things at home such us cleaning the house, cooking, and another kind of things that caming up every day when someone live alone. Drawing my own experince, I prefer to do another stuffs during the day than are doing houses chores. I have to admit, if I had been stayed more time at my home parents I could been done things that I could not make due to I had to go away too young.
In conclusion, I agree with the statement that it is better take some advantages waiting at home parents before to begin a new life as alone person. I support this idea with the reasons that I explained above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are sometimes
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Line 3, column 699, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...uong gay, I would like to tell him that it it better wait a little more living with p...
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Line 3, column 705, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...ay, I would like to tell him that it it better wait a little more living with parent t...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ink is about household chores. It seems an simply subjet. However, in order to liv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, thus, as to, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30042016807 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21522531211 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447478991597 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5245479525 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6956521739 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219976707841 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063386695848 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432681056348 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125442812835 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337764033471 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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