Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
It is well-known that communication has many different alternatives, from in-person contact to letters, email, or other options. While some people choose face-to-face communication because the message is communicated better. However, the world is changing, and communication is within the change. Thus, if I were to choose one, I prefer communicating through other sorts of communication for two main reasons.
First of all, touching in person could be more suitable and natural mostly. In other words, the massage is understood better between individuals. However, most of the time, people can not choose the face-to-face option, and they end up in other forms. Letters and email are two alternatives to replace it. I think those alternatives have remarkable benefits like saving time and being more efficient. For example, for companies who have to communicate to many people it is simply easier to use phone or email. Otherwise, they should never send every message to each customer. Both phone calls or email are definitely more efficient approaches that companies can select in order to achieve a goal.
In addition to the benefit of saving time, something to be in consideration is the importance of the massage. Especially there are particular messages that people prefer to do in person. Beyond this statement could be true, there are other alternatives to consider, such as phone calls. For instance, when I was doing my Ph. D. in Italy, my grandmother unfortunately passed away, and my parents could not travel until Italy to explain to me the situation. Regardless of the sad moment, they could transmit the sadness like it would have been in person to me.
In conclusion, face-to-face communication could be the best way to communicate a message; sometimes, it is impossible to carry out. For this reason, I prefer to choose other communications such as cell phones or email because they could accomplish the same result as in person, and sometimes it could be inclusive better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...It is well-known that communication has many different alternatives, from in-person contact to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19814241486 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03348702574 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560371517028 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5275268042 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.95 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.15 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257229683539 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772175377446 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731175203123 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173330960648 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824216686114 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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