If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice.
No one can deny that studying a new subject brings some advantages and disadvantages. Some people prefer to keep doing the same because they think it is waste of time and money. However, there are other people who believe that it is wonderful take new experience like study a new subject. In my case, I prefer to take this opportunity, and If I were forced to choose one, I would like to attempt woodworking for several reasons that I will develop in the following paragraphs.
First of all, woodworking is an activity where people have to use hands. There are people who think that using hands in order to learn something new could be boring. On the other hand, the humans being has used their hands forever. In my opinion, working with hands is a challenge, indeed hard at the beginning, but surely after a while it will became a the greatest experience. In addition, the feeling is outstanding when I am using my hands developing the perfect furniture.
Second, learning a new subject lead people to earn more money. Thus, progressing people not only could archive a new skill, but also they could get more money starting a new career. Regarding my desire, If I learn a new ability, I could start a new business. More specifically, my dream was build a shop at home and start my own company building and selling furnitures. In order to do this dream I will do my best effort.
Finally, woodworking is an activity which people can develop at home. As a result, working at home imply more time with family. Thus, there is no doubt that woodworking open a door in order to keep closer with family and folks. I think this value that someone could acquire just for study a new subject is invaluable. If I could have my own shop at home, I will be the luckiest person in the world, because not only I will spend time with may children and wife but also I will do that it want for every day of my life.
In conclusion for those reason that I have mentioned above I believe woodworking is the best subject that I would like to choose if I could.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...nning, but surely after a while it will became a the greatest experience. In addition...
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Line 2, column 352, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
...but surely after a while it will became a the greatest experience. In addition, the ...
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Line 2, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er a while it will became a the greatest experience. In addition, the feeling is ...
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Line 4, column 493, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for everyday'?
Suggestion: for everyday
...nd wife but also I will do that it want for every day of my life. In conclusion for those r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, thus, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47326203209 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53237353591 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483957219251 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7629224278 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.65 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10081779201 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362898926756 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453903183808 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751139361323 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04646154961 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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