Do you agree or disagree: People who spend more than an hour a day on social media are less happy than those who spend less time on social media.
Since new technologies such as laptops and cell phones were developed social media has increased. Some studies explain that social media is harmful to society because people spend many hours on it. However, other studies claim that spending a lot of hours on social media does not affect people's behavior. I totally agree with studies which state that social media has not had a negative impact on individuals' behavior.
First of all, Facebook, Whatsapp, and others social media has been become a part of our lives these last years. However, it is not true that they are transforming our communities into unhappy communities. Chatting with friends, looking for jobs, or shopping for whatever people want are some of those advantages that social media has. Also, I think social media is helping people to feel better in different ways. For example, I went to New York last year for my master's degree, and I stayed there for three months. Facetime allowed me to keep in touch with my family. I spent several hours a day talking with my wife and children, and I felt super content.
Finally, finding a job is so hard these days. However, social media allows companies to post a lot of advertisement and opportunities. Thus, if someone is looking for a new job, they can spend time searching there. It is clear that social media is important to keep in touch with family members, but it is also a place where people can become happy by finding new working opportunities. My friends, for instance, use those spaces to look for the perfect job. And they are not becoming unhappy people; instead, they hope that they could find the ideal job.
To sum up, there are some controversial studies about how people should use social media. However, I am completely convinced that it is barely possible that spending a couple of hours a day on social media could have negative influences on people. In addition, social media is an excellent place for chatting with friends or family members, and the perfect place for finding new job opportunities
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 400, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... media has not had a negative impact on individuals behavior. First of all, Facebook, What...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84240687679 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54339275878 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530085959885 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1150686967 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278559494784 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963889518923 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742965741756 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198144418028 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679857429662 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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