Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt. Explain your choice.
Most of the countries have a lot of customs for share such as meals, dances, or music. If I were to choose one traditional custom of my country that I would like people adopt, I prefer to share a traditional meal. More specifically, Argentine barbeque is the most important meal that all people of the world would like to adopt, and I will develop those reasons in the following paragraphs.
The first thing that people have learn in order to do an Argentina barbeque style is how the meat is chosen. In Argentina meat has highest quality, and those characteristics of quality is because our cows harvest the best pasture directly of the land. In other words, other countries where cows are under a shelter and they are feed by people every day, and this method of raising is not a totally a natural process which leading to a different type of meat. Thus, people who want to make a barbeque they should be to start choosing argentine meat.
Second, cooking method is important to know for obtain a great meat texture and flavor. There are many kinds of grill, some of them use gas, and other use electricity, but in Argentina barbeque is made with coal or logs. Using coal or logs, the flavor and texture of meat is different from other meat cooked by other countries. For example, I have an Italian friend, and when he came to Argentina he turned to a passionate for Argentina meat. He bought in Italy a smoke grill, but he never could make the same kind of meal that he tasted in Argentina. That it was because he did not use the same method.
Finally, the recipe is the thirst step to finish the greatest barbeque. There are many kinds of formulas, but the simplest, the best. Drawing my own experience, people who put various things with meat, the flavor could change and become different tasty. I believe that putting salt and pepper is the best combination. Sometimes, adding some potatoes and onions may improve a bit the flavor. But, if someone ask me I think salt and pepper is simply enough.
In conclusion, I believe that Argentina barbeque style it the best custom that I would like to share with other foreign people from my country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59480519481 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45712638308 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506493506494 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3542882034 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.45 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179520403019 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512171324128 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726517723738 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120528227269 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914972223255 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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