If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
If I am given a chance to study a subject which I never had the opportunity to study, I will choose to study psychology. I will choose this subject for the reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, I think I would like to study this subject because of the interest I have had in it since my young days. when I was in 8th grade, I was introduced to this subject by a friend who wanted to pursue a career in psychology. I never heard that word before but when I googled about it I was intrigued by the subject. Since then, I have started reading blogs and books on psychology.
Furthermore, I think psychology helps us to understand a person better. It gives us insights into how to react or behave in certain situations. It basically helps us to deal with our various human connections and relationships, and since these relations are an integral part of an individual’s life, studying psychology will help us to deal with them better. I would like to draw an example from my personal experience, my best friend once gifted me a floral dress on my birthday. I never liked floral dresses so, I was shocked and sad that my best friend, who knows me for 11 years, does not know my likes and dislikes. But, I kept my anger aside, accepted the gift, and politely told her that I don’t like floral dresses. Had, I got angry, the situation would have been worse. I could react the way I did because I had listened to a podcast about how to respond to this kind of situation.
Lastly, I would choose to take psychology because it was always my second career option after pharmacy. So, it would be great if I could get an opportunity to study it. Also, I have always been the kind of person who wants to help people deal with their problems. This is also one of the other reasons why I would choose to study psychology because it will help me to understand and help people better.
To sum up, because of the reasons mentioned above, I will choose to study psychology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, second, so, then, i think, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46321525886 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61763673294 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479564032698 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7687246355 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2105263158 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199850393461 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734018005343 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717458022536 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142008995477 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513711248509 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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