If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study,
what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and
details.
I remember very well that when I was in school, I really want to learn computer programming subject. In that subject at that time they used to teach basic knowledge of computers and their languages. Unfortunately, at that time students only can choose between math or biology stream and because of some friends and family members, I ended up with biology. later I found that my interest was in computers which is the branch of the math stream. However, if I could get a chance to study a subject that I have never had then I would choose computer science. I will explore my thought in the subsequent paragraph.
First, I would love to choose computer science because I dreamed myself a computer specialist by the age of 16, I decided to master every part of the computer. During my school time, I got admitted to MS-CIT and CCC courses which teach students about computer functioning, later I got distinction marks in those courses. my prior knowledge of computers and my keen interest could help me in doing a master’s in computer science. Now some people would cast doubt that you already learned then but I did not. The knowledge I got from those courses was just a small leaf of a big tree and I wanted to discover this whole tree by myself.
Second, I would feel very lucky if I could get the opportunity to choose computer science to study because I have the ability to understand complex topics, formulas, mathematical structures in coding languages, and so on. my profound interest in computer language would help me to create various platforms which is the main target of any computer science student. basically, I have such an interest in computer science that made me clear all the necessary requirements. I would like to complete my dream project of mathematics in which everyone can learn free math from the beginning to the advanced level with the help of computer science.
To conclude, because I have all prior knowledge of computer science and my curiosity about learning every aspect of computer science would make me choose computer science if I could get a chance to study it. Moreover, computer science is not the only subject that I wanted to learn if I could but also history and international relations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
I remember very well that when I was in ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Later
...amily members, I ended up with biology. later I found that my interest was in compute...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thought in the subsequent paragraph. First, I would love to choose computer s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...got distinction marks in those courses. my prior knowledge of computers and my kee...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... discover this whole tree by myself. Second, I would feel very lucky if I cou...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Basically
...target of any computer science student. basically, I have such an interest in computer sc...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to free'
Suggestion: to free
...mathematics in which everyone can learn free math from the beginning to the advanced...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l with the help of computer science. To conclude, because I have all prior kn...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7706185567 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69244301497 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474226804124 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5309220724 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.882352941 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8235294118 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149378106534 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574387551873 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738014376111 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101267643985 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266005751702 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.