Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents
were children.
Since the advent of technology, human life has become much more productive and efficient in terms of living, transportation and communication. I critically believe that life today is much more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. I have two reasons to justify my opinions.
During the time when my grandparents were children, the technology was in its infancy and not evolved to such an extent to affect a lot of people. For instance, My grandparents as children had to walk to their schools which was 10 miles far from home, on foot daily. The number of schools were limited and consisted of students who had to come from other parts of the city. My grandfather as a child would almost end up spending ten to twelve hours in just attending school and going to and fro. Thereby, we can infer that the infrastructure and development was minimal and led to severe wastage of time and productivity. Whereas, in my childhood, I had the privilege to go to school on a school bus. The distance was around 20 miles, but still, I was able to commute everyday because of the technological advancements. Despite commuting and attending school, I would end up spending maximum of eight to ten hours and enjoy the rest of my day. Thus, transportation has ameliorated vastly and touched all our lives and made it much more comfortable.
Secondly, when my grandparents were a child they did not have access to instant communication. Their only hope was a letter which would take from one week to several months to deliver. This delay in receiving information could have adverse effects, especially in times of emergencies. For instance, once my great grandfather was involved in an accident which fractured his legs and was unable to walk. Since, my great grandfather lived in the town to earn a better living, his only hope of informing his family, back at the village was through a letter. The letter got delivered two weeks later to my grandfather and he was helpless as he did not have any means to know about the whole incident. But now the communication technology has improved greatly. With advent of mobile phones, I can talk to my parents and dear ones instantly. Through, video calls we can even see a person who is staying almost opposite across the globe. Hence, life had become much more comfortable.
Thus, I believe that life has become much more comfortable with leaps and bounds advancements in science and more effort focused on research and development. Transportation, infrastructure and communication have improved our quality of living and made us more efficient in terms of productivity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 769, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...miles, but still, I was able to commute everyday because of the technological advancemen...
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Line 9, column 308, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: great-grandfather
...s of emergencies. For instance, once my great grandfather was involved in an accident which fract...
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Line 9, column 413, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: great-grandfather
... legs and was unable to walk. Since, my great grandfather lived in the town to earn a better livi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0202247191 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98636889751 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523595505618 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.070456448 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0833333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5416666667 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272568032513 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789022995945 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128816959561 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199473131169 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111412672478 0.0645574589148 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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