Life today is easier ans more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
With the passage of the time, the world is taking long stride in the path of development and facilitating people to make their life more comfortable. In my opinion, nowadays people are living their life comfortably as compared to the time when our grandfathers were children. I fell this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essays.
First of all, as compared to the past two to three centuries ago, technological development has flourished in many areas such as transportation. Now people are capable of travelling long distances in few hours but at the time when our grandfather were child, it used to take months to travel the same distance. For instance, my grandfather used to take one months to reach capital city of our district which is far from our village. He used horses and buggies for transportation of materials that are required for the daily life. Nevertheless, now we can travel the same distance in few hours with the help of buses, trains and airplanes. Furthermore, we can trade the materials at huge quantity with the help of these transportation means. This example illustrates how way of living has changed and with the advent of transportation, life has become easier.
Secondly, different countries in the worlds are competing with each other by taking the standard of common people to the next level. People all over the world have been able to take advantage in different fields such as education. Education has completely changed the way of living and standard of the people. For example, in the past centuries, in our country India, it was difficult to find jobs because people were illiterate at that time. People used to do menial jobs and it was difficult for them to manage their family from the income of low grade jobs. Most of the high income jobs were taken by the foreigners. On the other hand, now literacy rate of our country has increased. People have been able to get education as much as they want. Education system of our country has been able to produce capable manpower which is the most important things for a country to develop. As a result, people get high income jobs and they have been able to maintain their life at high level. This shows that the life has become less arduous as compared to the past two- three centuries.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the quality of life of people has upgraded as compared to the days of our grandfather when they were child. This is because transportation system has made it easier for commutation and to maintain the trade between two places. Furthermore, education system has helped people to make their life more comfortable as compared to the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one month', 'a month', or simply 'months'?
Suggestion: one month; a month; months
...r instance, my grandfather used to take one months to reach capital city of our district w...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2222.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79913606911 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71952866352 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438444924406 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1979301348 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5833333333 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2916666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29166666667 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119236834808 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381961497411 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042702134335 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933133793695 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031118235002 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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