A live in small town and a big city: benefits and problems and what is better?
Where shall we live? Some may choose to live in big cities, while other like the natural and quiet surroundings in small towns. But some people believe, that living in small towns is better than living in big cities because life in small towns is calm and measured, but safe and not expensive. However other people think differently. There are some benefits and problems which concern to life in them. But I personally would like to live in a big city because living in them has more advantages than living in the small towns.
As I already have said, there are some people, who think, that living in small towns is better than living in big cities. In their opinion, big cities have some problems of transportation. They generally have heavy traffic and expensive parking. Big cities suffer from overpopulation, which triggers a high crime rates. In addition, they believe that the pollution in big cities makes people sick. They also think more expensive goods and services are offered in big cities. I live in a big city. I do not agree with this statement and in my opinion and in my experience living in them has more interesting and saturated than living in the small towns.
I have found a lot of research which supports this opinion. I recently read an article in the “New York Times” magazine about the research of living benefits in big cities, such as cultural and technological. The city is the symbol of human civilization and there are many facilities for living, recreation and health care. I agree with the statement above about problems of transportation in big cities. But you can take public transportation, such as subway, what is cheaper than driving a car. Overpopulation in big cities is not the main cause of high crime rates. On the contrary, it stimulates the person’s life. In big cities there are more theaters, libraries, museums, opera houses, art galleries than in small towns, more technical innovations available. As for the pollution, with automobiles and modern highways we can easily take a break to expose to fresh air in the countryside and sunshine on the beach. Goods and services in large cities are more expensive, but people's incomes are much higher than incomes of people in small cities. It proves that life in big cities is better.
In conclusion I would like to say that I strongly hold my position about living in a big city, because it develops a person culturally and technologically. In big cities people earn a pretty sum of money, allowing them to buy more expensive and better products and services.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, as for, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2147.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87954545455 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75084885472 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3101869173 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5185185185 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2962962963 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25925925926 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404434453723 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115345279245 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113801644653 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266297869366 0.150856017488 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912143623515 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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