Loyalty is the most important quality in choosing a friend.
Different people have different opinions about most important characteristics of a friend. Some believe its intelligence and some believe that its humour. In my opinion, a good friend must be loyal and I will explain my choice in the following essay.
Firstly, any kind of relationship is based on trust and is believed to be the foundation. Once trust is lost, it becomes very difficult to believe in each other. Also, if we lie to our friend, there are very high chances that one leads to the other and before we even realise we are in a web of lies. For instance, one of my friend Amy invited her another friend Bill to attend her party. Instead of him telling her directly that he was not interested, he made up a story that he was sick. She believed and continued with her party. Meanwhile, Bill attended another party of his friend. Next day Amy went to her office and met someone who saw Bill at the other party and asked Amy why she wasn't at that party. This made her feel worse because she heard it from a third person that Bill was lying. Also, she was never the same with him again. This example of mine illustrates that truth will come out either now or later. But if it was heard from someone else, it might hurt the person and their relationship. Hence, telling the truth to friends is always better.
Secondly, a friend must be a person on whom we can rely on. If we know that our friend lies, it is very difficult to depend on them. For instance, if I am ever in a dire need of help, I would call the most reliable person because I know that he will surely help me right away. This is the behaviour of any person because we can not trust the person who lies. What if they say they can help us but turns out they bail on us? Thus, in my opinion, a person without loyalty can never be trusted.
Although many might argue that being supportive, cooperative and humorous are the most important qualities of a friend, if a person with all these qualities is not reliable, I would never be friends with him. This is because I believe that my friends give me their honest opinion and are trustworthy.
In conclusion, I believe that loyalty is the most important characteristic in any friend because we can trust them in the time of need and be sure that they will never hurt us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, third, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40515222482 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3929086422 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463700234192 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2824439158 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.24 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.08 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.24 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21325009934 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057931128527 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785820902703 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159599437858 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831944531276 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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