Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The issue is on whether corporations bear responsibility on the well being of the society and environment they survive in. I strongly believe that the corporations have a responsibility of the social well being on society.
Firstly, corporations depend on multiple factors like labor, raw materials and many others to succeed. These are generally obtained from the society the organization is established. For example, raw materials of a coffee company mainly include coffee beans. The coffee company may indulge in either trades with the other states with abundant coffee supply or start a farm in the same area. Either way the organization is indirectly or directly helping the society by creating more number of employments and increasing the trades thus impacting the economy.
Secondly, involving corporate social responsibility(CSR) is a kind of win-win policy because, along with improving the societal conditions, a positive image will be built for the organization. Positive Brand image plays a crucial role for the investors and is more likely to make a deal with companies involved in CSR. A recent poll also suggests that employees are more likely to feel connected after taking part in such events because every person wants to be a part of something bigger and corporations are providing them with an opportunity to full fill this feeling. It is also shown that employees prefer to join such companies and the current employees ten to stay longer. Also, another advantage of CSR is tax benefits. The companies which take part in CSR gets tax rebate as the corporations are performing the tasks that are to be performed by the government using the tax money.
Lastly, recent studies show that people are more likely to buy products of a company that involved in CSR and also recommend the company's products to others too as customers feel positively connected and satisfied on being helpful to the needed. For example, "Classmate" notebooks started a drive where 1 rupee will be donated to a rural area for the education of children on purchase of every book. After the start of this drive, the company saw a huge increase in its sales implying that people switched to "Classmate".
To conclude, I believe that corporations involving in social responsibility is a win-win policy as it provides advantages to both society and the organization in its financial matters.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 389.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19794344473 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14002048661 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519280205656 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9297758672 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.941176471 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8823529412 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201785450293 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716423715874 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991089100644 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152160929419 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143468717545 0.0667264976115 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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