Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The issue provides two possible views of what makes a leader successful. I believe that a healthy competition is very important for any organization to move forward and at the same time cooperation is also important. competition helps one to understand what could be done better whereas cooperation helps to progress basing on each others success.
Firstly, a healthy competition motivates anyone to get the best out of oneself. without any competition, it is a natural human tendency to feel complacent. For example, the major two tech giants Microsoft and Google, would not have been what they are now without the great neck to neck competition between the two. google search engine is famous for its ability to provide accurate results within a fraction of seconds. this kind of accuracy and efficiency helped Microsoft to improve their search engine "Bing" which now provides comparable accuracy and efficiency. Microsoft's browser "Internet Explorer" motivated google to create one of its own and make google search engine default. thus we can see that a healthy competition is very important.
However, if being highly competitive can be harmful to both the organization and its employees or a government and its people. For example, in the television series "Silicon Valley" a CEO of a company who is portrayed as very competitive, does all the deeds to buy the protagonist's start-up which comes up with an innovative streaming system. The CEO even tries to steal the idea from the startup. Nevertheless, the CEO soon faces a huge downfall. this shows that being over competitive does not lead to success.
cooperation is another important feature a leader must possess. without cooperation between the organizations or governments, it is very difficult to proceed further. For example, Microsoft's new motto by Satya Nadella "Empower every organization on the planet" which was followed religiously by the whole organization skyrocketed its performance. this is mainly because if the organizations like Dell, HP, Lenovo- the partners of Microsoft face a downfall, so will Microsoft. thus striving not only for its own success but also for other's success is important.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that a mixture of healthy competition and cooperation will lead to the success of an organization.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Competition
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...ck to neck competition between the two. google search engine is famous for its ability...
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... and make google search engine default. thus we can see that a healthy competition i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, thus, whereas, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 368.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4347826087 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22091463956 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1782016091 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2380952381 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5238095238 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141875419179 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445158534951 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540542027388 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888704118485 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474505550511 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.