The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The issue is about the best way for preparing the young people for leadership is by instilling a sense of cooperation and not competition. Cooperation is very important for any organization or a country to proceed further and healthy competition is as important as cooperation. But while teaching young people, one must make sure that the difference between healthy competition and over competition is understood.
Firstly, Cooperation will provide a win-win scenario where both the parties involved have advantages. Any organization can not develop without cooperation either internally or externally. For example, in case of developing a mobile phone multiple people from various backgrounds like a software engineer, an electrical engineer, a designer must cooperate, only then the output will be successful. If people do not prefer to cooperate and let's say, only a software engineer tries to develop the mobile phone without any help from other, probably the software inside the phone might be 100% smooth but what about the perfect microchips to use? What about the external design of the mobile? What about the durability of the materials being used? There is a little chance in making the product as perfect as it would be if all these cooperate and work together. If such important sense is not instilled in young people, succeeding in their careers or life will be difficult.
However, healthy competition is equally important. Without competition, it is natural to human to become complacent and might not try to get the best out of themselves. For example, Google search engine's highly accurate and efficient responses motivated another tech giant Microsoft to enhance their search engine "Bing" and now Bing gives almost as accurate results as that of Google. If Microsoft was not competitive maybe it might not be worried in getting better results as it already has huge market to compensate.
On the other hand, being over competitive is detrimental to the organization or a government. If one gets over-competitive, they might fall into the sense of becoming number 1 in any situation. This might result in taking up unethical paths. For example, in a television series "Silicon Valley" the CEO of a company is over competitive and can not handle if someone else does better than him. This attitude made him stoop to a level of stealing the protagonist's start-up company idea. The CEO soon undergoes legal actions and faces a huge downfall. Thus it is very important to make sure that young people do not become over competitive while maintaining a healthy competition.
To conclude, I strongly believe that instilling cooperation among young children is very important. Also, a heathly competition is important too. But letting them become over competitive might be detrimental.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, still, then, thus, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2378.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 450.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28444444444 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05436825417 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.6791356115 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.12 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142345378207 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413944483642 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776922527637 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908204996707 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684453403954 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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