Luck or hard work.
There are always two types of people, who claims that the success comes as a result of hard work, while others believe that it is just a product of fortune. I am certain that success only comes to people who are ambitious, perseverance and hard-working.
To begin with, success is a result of hard-work and labor of disciplines, it is never just a fortune. Success happens over time only after a series of correct decisions and small victory, while luck is generally considered one-time event. Most of the successful people have been through very big challenges to succeed. They have been working 12 hours a day and they have not stopped learning even now, because they have winning traits. There are successful and happy, because they are not afraid of blows of fate. Hardworking people never gives up, they are always on search of new ideas and self-development. However, when someone is successful, others think that it is just a fortune, because do not know what he or she has been through to get there. When someone is successful, because that person is working hard more than anyone in the environment.
Secondly, it is just a popular way of belief to wait for a luck to be successful. That type of people also might call self-liars, because they do not have enough motive to work harder and keep up on it. The matter of fact, some people think that fortune is constant, but you might be lucky just once or twice, but without hard work and self-discipline, it never lasts for long time. All these kinds belief comes as a matter of wrong convictions and lack of knowledge.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that success comes only as a result of hard-work, and not good fortune. These who beliefs that success comes with a fortune waits it for till the end of their life. The world does not changes, until you change your-self.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kinds'' or 'kind's'?
Suggestion: kinds'; kind's
...it never lasts for long time. All these kinds belief comes as a matter of wrong convi...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
...e end of their life. The world does not changes, until you change your-self.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69349845201 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62493059296 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7470987744 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1764705882 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260605164654 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831691206727 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854125960348 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168347084032 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276556051372 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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