Why people go to the University?
University is the best place for the ones who wants to change their life for better side. Nowadays most people continue their education after college in Universities. They want to get deeper knowledge about their professions, which they have chosen.
Firstly, University is the best place for the people who, wants to make new friends and become more communicated. In every University, they are thousands of adults, which means you can easily make a company with anyone. University life is one of the most memorable periods for every student. Usually in this period, some people find their best friends or their partners, which are going to be with them for their entire life. In this period, people totally change mentally and physically. Some people start to gain knowledge seriously, while the others go to the gym and try to become more attractive.
Secondly, Universities offer to their students a high level of knowledge. Usually, University teachers are professors with a very high experience of job. That gives a chance for the students, who are willing to get a knowledge. University study system have many directions of professions, which is demanded very high in society. Students have lectures and kinds of group activities during the classes. The resources of the professors are more broadly and they usually know answer to the questions. They can tell you about the knowledge which isn’t written in the book. All of these provides students with a high knowledge.
Thirdly, University provides their students not just with a high knowledge, but with a University degree, too. University degree makes people’s life easier, because they can find a high paying job. As we know, that money is important for everyone and a high paying job will help people to live better. Besides, they can easily effort their family and have a chance to live in a better condition. On the other hand, their children go to better school and gain more knowledge.
In conclusion, If you want to change your life for better side and live better, University is the best choice you can only make.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'knowledge'.
Suggestion: knowledge
...or the students, who are willing to get a knowledge. University study system have many dire...
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Line 5, column 611, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'high knowledge'.
Suggestion: high knowledge
...ok. All of these provides students with a high knowledge. Thirdly, University provides their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02865329513 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64137693468 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481375358166 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2176250571 48.9658058833 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.3043478261 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1739130435 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215921113486 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693165243292 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057350802879 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129775574796 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695537110553 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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