Why people go to the University to study?
Nowadays the word of a University is very popular for the high school students! Now, everyone dreams to continue education at different kinds of Universities, because they want to get a specified education according to their major interests, get a University degree and a high paying job of course.
Firstly, University life is one of the most fascinating and unforgettable time for every student. The best thing about it is you can make new friends as much as you want, do more communicating and going out every weekend with friends, too. Besides, every University has gotten many different kinds of awesome activities like dance clubs, sport clubs and student’s teams and others. At the same time, you will be busy with improving knowledge and choose any kind of activity, which you prefer and make your time more enjoyable.
Secondly, University provides students with a very clear knowledge about the society. A systematic study in a college and a University enables them to realize how society works. After the graduation, they will be able to understand better and solve the problems of society. Besides, they can easily be the leaders and create new opportunities in society life.
Third but the not the last, Studying at a University offers them a University degree and education, which makes life more enjoyable and easily. As the result of the accomplishments of four-year study, it is not difficult for them to find a high paying job in most cases. On the other hand, they can afford their family without any sufferings and live the way they dream.
In my opinion, studying at University is the genius idea and one of the most important turning point of life, which everybody should have that chance!
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
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Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the not the'. Did you mean 'not the'?
Suggestion: not the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, kind of, of course, in most cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98263888889 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78900292692 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2219851042 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.384615385 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169571804595 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627657496251 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631727080952 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977037770431 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198964122445 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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