As the most clever living species, we as human-beings are also animals in some extent. Thus I believe the relationships between people and their pets are good enough in my opinion. Even some of the people treat their pets as members of family. I believe this is the natural emotions of the owners'. Besides, it is because of the different ways of considering the relationship of people to perspect the world outside make som of us do not accept these pets as family memebers like sons or sisters. I will address my view as follows.
To begin with, people's thinking that their pets as family members because they need this relation. Some of the people have no siblings or parents thus they could take theirs pets as their kins. My neighbor living upstair my apartment is an old grandma. As her daughter is working overseas and no other relatives living in thi city, she raised a cat. As this busy lady came back twice a year thus she could not accompany her mother. This grandpa was happy with the cat she adopted. This cute little thing could alleviate her missing of her daughter. So the pet of hers is some kind of her daugher's role though it could not cook for her.
In addtion, I believe the pets could be taken as the memebers of one's family as they could play and live with us, sometimes we have to look after each other. Due to the development of the society, there are more and more pet hospitals and other pet service. This means people came to realize the importance of having pets gradually. Especcially some high technology development in the pet market has been meeting more and more requiements of their owners. Now we can buy a n AI hatch to the cats people raised . it can control the temprature of the hatch atuomatically, thus the cat would have a more sweet sleep. Just like we buy more comfortable bed for ourselves.
Finally, some of the people would say that the pets are still the lower level animals. I have to say that as primates, we are also mammals. It is true that the human-beings might have changed the world as we like., while it is just the pets we raied reminds us that we are also animals. Or in another word, the relationships of people and their pets would represent the represent the one between people and the nature. Thus in this degree, I believe people should take their pets as family memebers. So the harmonius balance would make sense.
In all, I believe people should treat their pets as the memebers of family, these relationship are good and harmonius.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: this relationship; these relationships
...t their pets as the memebers of family, these relationship are good and harmonius.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, if, look, so, still, thus, while, even so, kind of, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56762749446 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44713068438 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461197339246 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9852425065 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5714285714 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1071428571 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219389586733 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732410644671 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906367264657 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172818613076 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799529372609 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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