Many people think that weather influences people’s moods and behavior. How does weather influence you in your daily life?
Use specific details to explain your answer.
Since ancient times, weather has always been the most essential part in human society. Although our technology has advenced dramatically, we still can’t control weather, and weather continues to influence our everyday life.
Living in the tropical zone, I am surrounded by hot and humid weather most of the year, especially during summer. This is my most disliked period of the year since the extremely high temperature and the air full of moisture will make me feel quite uncomfortable. When summer sets in, the temperature will rise to a startling 35 degrees Celsius. Under this scorching atmosphere, even standing under a tree will make one sweat a lot. As a consequence, I tend to become lazy and sleepy during summer vacation. I don’t want to move, and I don’t have the feeling to do some meaningful work. All I want to do is stay in my bedroom and turn on the air conditioner.
Contrary to hot weather, I love rainy days. These are the times when the sky is covered by a thick layer of clouds and all you can see is small drops of water landing everywhere, like they are dancing to the music of the nature. In my opinion, this scenery is poetic, beautiful, and relaxing. Moreover, I love to watch the rain through my bedroom. Because there is a vast green land outside my room window, and there will be no one walking on it during raining days, I can imagine myself being in the wild.
However, when the typhoon comes, the rainy days become horrible and scary, but not poetic. During typhoon days, the wind gets furious, and the rain is accompanied by thunder and lightning. I can hear the wind roaring outside, and I am scared that the fierce wind will break my window. Nevertheless, there are also some benefits in a typhoon day. For example, the school will take a day off when the wind is too strong or the rain is too big. Furthermore, typhoons often occur during summer months, and their coming can make the unbearably hot weather cool down a little.
Without a doubt, weather is of paramount importance in our life. It can have a significant effect on our moods and behaviors, and people living in different regions will have different concepts for weather due to distinct weather conditions. I believe that unless we can gain control over the nature, we will be influenced by weather a lot.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69852941176 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59348356596 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551470588235 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0348064651 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.347826087 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7391304348 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26086956522 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125112221175 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345656743988 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518747615364 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861053754308 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785424650072 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69852941176 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59348356596 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551470588235 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0348064651 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.347826087 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7391304348 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26086956522 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125112221175 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345656743988 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518747615364 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861053754308 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785424650072 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.