Many people welcome the opening of shopping areas near their homes. On the other hand, some people are strongly opposed to the construction of such facilities. If the opening of a large shopping center in your neighborhood were announced, would you support or oppose its construction? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
The idea of construction of a shopping mall near a residential area is controversial which means many people probably do not prefer it. In my opinion, I think it would be great if such a facility is constructed in my community. I feel this way for the following reasons which I will explore in this essay.
To begin with, building a mall in a neighborhood is very convenient for people which means it facilitates shopping for the people. The malls contain big department stores. These store carry every basic thing that people need. Also, shopping in huge departmental stores cost is less expensive as compare to the small shops in an area. To exemplify, I live in an area where we have a mall behind our neighorhood. It encompasses big deparment stores like target, costco, and marshalls. Furthermore, it has few eatries like starbucks and chipotle. Whenever i want to get some groceries or run some errands, I do not need to worry to have to drive very far. I simply walk there and grab the things I need. Therefore, I m so happy to support the construction of a shopping facility near in my community.
In addition, shopping malls are a good place to spend some leisure time with friends and family as they have some fun places. People usually prefer to shopping in enormous malls with families, so their children could also enjoy and have good time. For instance, when my children got bored at home, I take them to shopping at target so they could look around for toys and other kids stuff. Meanwhile, I m able to shop around for my necessities and other important things for house. This makes me feel happy because my children enjoy going there. This would not have been possible if there is no mall near in a neighborhood.
In conclusion, I encourage the construction of a shopping mall near residential area. This is because malls are convenient for everyday shopping, and because people enjoy shopping spree with friends and family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72941176471 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75114949238 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5384756199 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5714285714 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1904761905 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250105064657 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765084871575 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653321576374 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169681644987 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121470534973 0.0645574589148 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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