I am a university student, and there are some students around me who are going to study abroad. In fact, I am going to enroll in a foreign university myself. There are many advantages that lead to their staying overseas, but I will explain two of them.
Firstly, I believe that students can expose themselves to different values and lifestyles from themselves. This commitment to another culture would be of great importance for those who have no experience in spending their lives overseas. For example, the first time I went to another country than my native one, when I was in a high school, I was astonished that people spend hours having dinner. In my country, many people do not take spend so much time in eating because they are busy working or studying. However, people there enjoyed having a chat with their friends and eating together, spending more than 2 hours. I do not think this is usual in my state. This kind of exposure to another way of living would cultivate people's minds, creating a meaningful life for long.
Another reason is that students can see their own countries in a subjective way. If they remain in their native countries for many years, they would be patriotic without thinking much about the relationships with other countries and become aggressive about trivial things. However, when they put themselves in a situation where they turn minorities, they will come to realize that there are other side of people than them. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I participated in the summer program of a foreign university, I was asked by my roommates about how I interpret international issues, the pros and cons of my own country, and the like. I had not noticed how I was ignorant about my own country. This experience brought me home to the importance of leaning my own country, its characteristics, and its culture as well as those of foreign countries.
Finally, we might get an access to academic studies of a higher standard. In my country, studying at colleges is an uncommon decision, which results in a relatively fewer population in academic fields, causing poor conditions in research. To be more specific, I am curious about molecular biology, but there are a handful of universities in this country. This is why I want to study abroad and get proficient in this academic field, which could hopefully result in a development of this field in my country as well.
For these reasons above, students are eager to apply for foreign schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, for example, in fact, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2079.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83488372093 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76543703031 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518604651163 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2312874534 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180442246548 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572229861565 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680627681632 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117372044702 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689801843161 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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