Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries Why do some students study abroad

These days there are many advancements in the education system and they vary across the globes.Some students will be more enthusiastic to explore the world and learn new things.This makes them to travel abroad. My personal experience is a compelling example for this. I will elaborate on this in the following paragraphs.

To begin with, I belong to a lower middle class family where there were very limited facilities to study and grow in career. In my family, my father is the only bread earner, so I have studied in a local school which did not even teach english language. In the summer holidays, I used to vist my aunt's house in the city and then I understood the lifestyle of the urban people. On experiencing this, I started liking new surroundings and my interest towards exploring new things got enhanced. As a result, I decided to move to multiple places in order to grow myself both personally and professionally and moreover, I seriously wanted to stand by my father to support him. Gradually, I started developing my english reading and writing skills by reading books,newspapers and conversing in english in online chatrooms with my city friends.Finally, I have completed my bachelors degree and moved abroad to pursue further studies. Therefore, in my case, a zeal in me to learn more and live happy, made me do all these things in my life. I believe that there are so many people like me in our country, who want to do the same.

Secondly, there will be a need to learn new languages to attend colleges in abroad to avoid language barriers.This furthermore adds up to the number of speaking languages for a student, which is definitely a good thing. For instance, my friend learnt german while doing his masters from his native german friend. This helped him in getting a job opportunity in a german based company. So, I would say that this improves the communication skills of the people.

Another reason which I presume is the financial growth and also it helps the students to be more adaptable to all the situations. If a person lives in one place throughout his life, he cannot learn new things as he will be always in his comfort zone. There is a quote in english that "Life begins at the end of your comfort zone". This is what I believed in my early ages and here I am today. I have experienced many ups and downs in my initial college days and then I handled all the hurdles with endurance.

In addition, I suppose that studying in abroad makes us grow faster financially than being in one place. My personal experience is a compelling example for this. I earn more than my friends in my country who have same experience as me. This is due to my direct exposure to clients and there will not be any third party involved here. I directly pick up projects from my customers and work on them until project delivery. This is possible because I live around them, where as my friends do not have this possibility to work directly with project givers.

In conclusion, aforementioned paragraphs describe some of the reasons for students willing in moving to other countries for education. They do this for their better career opportunities which directly impact their financial status and also for learning new things.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 84.0 43.0788530466 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2695.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 566.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76148409894 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87757670434 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80854105063 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524734982332 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 853.2 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 27.0 9.59856630824 281% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9482624611 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11989354691 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315516263244 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385185543906 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736875609282 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349800357272 0.0645574589148 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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