I seriously believe that our younger generations should be following specific rules in order to form a good society. I personally feel this way, as I read somewhere that today's youth are going to be tomorrow's responsible citizens, who are going to represent our nation. I would elaborate on this in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, we are once youngsters who got to know our rules through our elder generations. Those elders have taught us to behave according to our surroundings. If they haven't been there for us to teach, we have not been like this today.
I would like to mention about some of the ongoing rules pertained in our society. Some of them are traffic rules, education system, real estate and so on. As the government imposed strict traffic rules on the individuals by introducing tests for providing driving license for 2 or 4 wheelers or any heavy vehicles, the rate of accidents is being handled well in our country.
In addition they would also charge some fines if the people do not follow certain traffic rules. Consequently, the people would be careful while driving and therefore we could stay happy. This is a kind of very beneficial rule posed on youngsters. In addition to the above, our government has introduced free education system to lower class people whose annual income would be less than one lakh rupees in our country which enables all the children to study. Also, there are certain norms on the annual fess laid by private education managements. This would be strictly monitored by the officials. So, I would like to say that these kind of rules should be taught to the students in their primary education level. For example,
To add up, I suppose that along with the strict rules set on a native, there should be proper management to monitor them. For instance, back in my college days, I had a friend who did not had a driver's license, though he used to go to bike racings in the midnights His parents were both working and did not pay much attention towards him and thus they were not aware of his activities, Unfortunately, he lost both of his legs due to an accident and then I realised that having strict rules is not only important but also people should follow them. Furthermore, I would also like to state that there should be some kind of awareness programs conducted in higher schools or colleges so that the youth do not tend to commit any mistakes, through our society would have significant impacts.
In conclusion to the above mentioned topic, I concur that the adjudications enforced on individuals are always beneficial for betterment of the society. Also, there is a need for proper governance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...feel this way, as I read somewhere that todays youth are going to be tomorrows respons...
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Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... who are going to represent our nation. I would elaborate on this in the followin...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... according to our surroundings. If they havent been there for us to teach, we have not...
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Line 4, column 31, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... today. I would like to mention about some of the ongoing rules pertained in our society....
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Line 4, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...duals by introducing tests for providing driving license for 2 or 4 wheelers or a...
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Line 6, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ing handled well in our country. In addition they would also charge some fines if th...
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Line 6, column 628, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...officials. So, I would like to say that these kind of rules should be taught to the studen...
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Line 6, column 727, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir primary education level. For example, To add up, I suppose that along with the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81917211329 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66913963963 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535947712418 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.6526414607 48.9658058833 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235778010012 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767256375465 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629265448456 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113842513814 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802098902223 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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