Material on the Internet should be censored or controlled to protect the public.
In my opinion, material on the Internet should not be censored. The Internet is a free zone and it would be wrong for this area to be controlled. Plus, what government or agency would be responsible for censoring the Internet, which is available worldwide?
First of all, material on the Internet should not be censored because the Internet is a free zone . The Internet is not owned by any one government or company. This means that no one should have the right to say what can or cannot be posted on it. Companies or governments can control what material shows up on their websites, but they cannot control what private citizens do. Second, technology makes it too difficult to censor material on the Internet. Every day, new computer programs are developed that make other programs obsolete. As soon as someone figures out how to censor material on the Internet, someone else can figure out how to break the code. This means that a tremendous amount of money would have to be spent on developing new technology, and this expense would not be worth it.
As this essay has demonstrated, material on the Internet should not be cen sored. The Internet is too big to be controlled, and the technology involved in censoring it would be too expensive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ored because the Internet is a free zone . The Internet is not owned by any one go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 1977.66487455 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 217.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77419354839 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68735313017 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 212.727598566 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6345449708 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.6923076923 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44386370897 0.236089414692 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187329660145 0.076458572812 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118325079859 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350966543256 0.150856017488 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00587319352381 0.0645574589148 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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