Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Do you agree or disagree and give reasons and examples

When it comes to the issue the importance of having the single culture in the world, some people believe that it is an inevitable way that we should go However, others have the opposite view by highlighting its drawbacks. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. It would be better to consider influential factors in every culture.

First and the most important factor is the Language. Every culture is determined by distinct language, which allows it to be different from others. Before the 20th century, a wide range of people across the world speak their language, while now the scenario is altered. With the advent of the technological and industrial revolution, the world has become inundated with digital device and equipment. The expanding computer and the internet, people tend more to use English, which is prevailing language in them. Gradually, the trend for learning English has increased more and more, conversely; plenty of languages have forgotten. Nowadays, believe it or not, most people have the same language, English, and use it in their routine activities.

Another point is that modern people can communicate with each other readily. In the past, humans were living in the isolated environment and could not associate with a wide range of people. As a result, humans lives in small folks that every of them had special rites according to their perception of the world. They had a limited world which makes them fanatic. In contrast, we can contact with various people in every corner of the world by virtue of the new communication tools. Therefore, today's people can become familiar with diverse of points of view, which helps them to have the resilient mind. Eventually, we are more capable of having a united culture than our ancestors.

In conclusion, all above evidence supports this fact that, sooner or later, we should accept the single culture. To the sake of striking advances, we have to settle our differences and lived in the same society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02702702703 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64913888948 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570570570571 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0092449332 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1052631579 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0821481810194 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254062179748 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287713413177 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538927407352 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108598313989 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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