In modern times, parents learn more from their children. do you agree or disagree with this concept
Advanced life has a tremendous impact on people's life. Youngsters Nowadays have a lot of information. They could help their parent because they have good information in many realms. From my vantage point, I believe that young individuals could help their parents for the following reasons.
To begin with, young people are experts in using technology devices. They are using many tools in order to study. For instance, many young individuals nowadays are using phone, laptop, and I pod. They can use these tools to enhance their information, widen their knowledge, improve his education, and study in any college by online classes. On the other hand, elderly do not have any information about these devices. They do not have any idea about simple knowledge like my mother always ask me to write massages for her because she do not how to deal with a progress phone. Moreover, sometime she rejects the phone when someone calls her instead of answering. I tries to learn her how to answer the phone, take picture, write, and save massages. As a result, old people can learna new technology from young people.
Finally, Youngsters have update information than ages people. They could help them to enhance information, especially about health subjects. For instance, before many years, my father had kidney diseases and stones. He used herbal beverages to treat himself instead of going to the doctor because he thought that kidney stones would dissolve by herbal dring. He did not like the doctor because he afraid of surgery. I searched by google and found that doctors could use the laser to dissolve kidney stones without any surgery or blood. I explained to him and showed for him many videos in the internet. Finally, he did it. Therefore, the elderly have outdated information. they could learn much information from youth that could have a positive influence on their health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 534, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...e to write massages for her because she do not how to deal with a progress phone. ...
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Line 5, column 664, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'try'
Suggestion: try
...meone calls her instead of answering. I tries to learn her how to answer the phone, t...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 395, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[3]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'he's afraid'.
Suggestion: he's afraid
...ing. He did not like the doctor because he afraid of surgery. I searched by google and fo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 674, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... the elderly have outdated information. they could learn much information from youth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0447284345 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50749674698 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549520766773 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4801806338 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.652173913 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6086956522 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21739130435 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0991535898896 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270021973789 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378879019753 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755147521121 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314602153069 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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