money
Two different perspective emerges while meticulously evaluating this issue. one perspective answers in the affirmative with utmost conviction where as other perspective denies its presence with logical reasoning.
Today's world is giving priority to earn money. Society have
distinction based on how much one is making money. To take part in this race people rushing themselves. they think that money gives you not only prestige but also respect. Up to some extent this is true. celebrities having lots of money are considered as stronger candidate of for film. Such celebrities, getting paid more, are likely to be more famous. Its true that money attracts money. If i am having a principle amount, i would invest it all and earn more. Many face difficult and poor childhood. this kind of situation generates mentality of earning more of cash. Due to above mentioned reasons most of people believe that getting lots of money is good.
Satisfaction has its own defination. More money can satisfy greedy people but one like me might think that satisfaction lies within earning enough money for mundane works and satisfactory life. this type of mentality generally found in middle class where as other mentality found in ambitious personality. Going beyond community and its new classification system is necessary. To understand a standard balanced life where we can have to keep aside money oriented approach. there are people like Dr. Baba Aamate, Social worker who earned money that will be enough for living. after having capacity to earn more money he choose to have simple and satisfactory life. our history has proved that people will remember rich people when they are alive but they will remember altruist after their death also.
Personally, I have proclivity towards the thought that earning money that satisfy basic needs of daily life is more than enough. Out there somewhere in the world there are lots of people who don’t get food to eat or chance to earn. we are living in world where we have to move on together. we can not change mentality of people but our example will be inspiring them to do so.
Hence, after this holistic analysis we can clearly see that both points have its own school of though but having satisfactory life is always better than greedy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ile meticulously evaluating this issue. one perspective answers in the affirmative ...
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... the affirmative with utmost conviction where as other perspective denies its presence w...
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...ing priority to earn money. Society have distinction based on how much one is mak...
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...iority to earn money. Society have distinction based on how much one is making money. ...
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...in this race people rushing themselves. they think that money gives you not only pre...
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...espect. Up to some extent this is true. celebrities having lots of money are considered as ...
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... Its true that money attracts money. If i am having a principle amount, i would i...
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...ney. If i am having a principle amount, i would invest it all and earn more. Many...
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...ntality generally found in middle class where as other mentality found in ambitious pers...
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...d money that will be enough for living. after having capacity to earn more money he c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09186351706 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56155608324 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57217847769 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0779144659 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8518518519 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1111111111 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.48148148148 5.45110844103 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314941453383 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109668110091 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153552630942 0.0737576698707 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166096378141 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144704856994 0.0645574589148 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.