Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Agree or disagree?
It goes without saying that in this sophisticated and progressive world where we live, there has been a huge advancement in technology, particularly in entertainment productions. In the modern era, various breakthroughs have happened in technology such as television which has affected the everyday life of people, especially the young generation. Besides, a variety of channels and hundreds of various programs are easily accessible attracting different age groups in today's hectic life. While some people believe that TVshows and movies' negative effects on youngsters' behavior outweigh the positive ones, others stand at the other side of the continuum and holding the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, I believe that television or movies have a lot of valuable influences on the young generation's life. In what follows two elaborate reasons will vindicate my viewpoint.
Nowadays, television is a major source of fun which affects everyone's life and brings about joy to anyone especially the young. There is lots of pressure on every aspect of humans' life and young individuals are not exceptions. They face different problems during their daily life and struggle with a lot of anxiety and stress. They tend to reduce this tension in different ways such as watching TV. It not only brings about a lot of happiness and fun for the young but also helps to decrease a considerable amount of stress and nervousness. To put it in other words, the new generation can release their minds and set themselves free to gain significant mental relaxation for a while. As a result, watching TV can balance their behavior due to the reduction of aggressive manner. A personal experience can drive this notion home. I used to work in the afternoon during my education. After having a lot of hard courses at the university in the morning, I had to go to work for 5 hours without any break. At night when I arrived home, I was too anxious and argued about every little subject with my family members but when I began to watch my favorite TV show I gradually began to become more relaxed and the tension which I faced began to disappear. Had I not watched any movies or TV shows in that period, I wouldn't have been able to survive my hectic life.
On the other hand, It's is obvious that watching some TV programs can have some negative effects such as showing aggressive behaviors, violating rules, and increasing the rate of crime. However, it largely depends on the audiences and their way of thinking. Watching TV can also positively affect youngsters' attitudes and present them with great role models. There is a lot of advantageous information about effective lifestyles which is shared with viewers via TV documentaries. Based on recent studies, scientists have found that watching a specific type of TV show could change the young generation's line of thoughts. Moreover, the data provided in the research has demonstrated that the more the youth watch some special series, the more they tend to act or behave like their actors. It is crystal clear that in this way several kinds of positive attitudes would be developed in their manner.
In conclusion, Taking the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, watching movies and TV shows are not only helpful to lower the presence of any spiritual pressure, but also would be beneficial to flourish and broaden one's knowledge and good characteristics in modern youth's lifestyle. Last but not the least, although watching TV might indeed have some drawbacks, its positive impacts would outweigh the negative ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2979.0 1977.66487455 151% => OK
No of words: 594.0 407.700716846 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01515151515 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93681225224 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81709547868 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 309.0 212.727598566 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520202020202 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 932.4 618.680645161 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2150553016 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85185185185 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195060202609 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489735567092 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479494187311 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12525047386 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544584349811 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 154.0 86.8835125448 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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