Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
In today's modern world, the Media like television and movies have a considerable impact on the life of people, especially the young. As far as the Media is concerned, some are of opinion that it benefits children because they are instructive, while others believe that they have been adversely affected the behaivor of young people. I-for one- subscribe to the latter idea on the ground that teenagers spend most of their time with TV and movies, advertisements negatively impact them, and they bring about violence in the young.
To begin with, today children pay too much attention to cartoons instead of participating in physical activities and palys or doinf their schoolwork, the same are doing juveniles by watching movies and TV shows. For instance, my nephew watches animation movies all the time when he is at home, the time he could have used to go to playground with hs friends or study his lessons. This can have a harmful effect on his school grades as well as his health. Actually, TV is making the young people coach potatos.
Secondly, another concomitant negative efficacy of the Media has to do with advertisement. Watching commericial messages all the time, induces the consumerist behavior in the young, which not only influences their future, but also endangers the whole society. For example, when children learn, from their early stage of life, that they should buy fancy products which are been advertising in TV and movies, they cannot focus on the more important facets of their life. This would results in a generation that could not help their nation to develop.
The last but not the least reason which reinforces the preceding assertion that the Media have negative impacts on the teenagers behavior is associated with the juvenile delinquency. The violence and the luxurious life of criminals that have been shown in many movies make a incentive into the young to reach those things. In fact, according to the latest statistics, many teenagers opt the badman of movies as their role model. This is a serious issue that can ring the bell for all parents and authorities.
All in all, taking into account what was already mentioned, I do believe that the disadvantages of TV programs and movies on children behaviors significantly outweigh their benefits. Because, it prevents the young to do better activities, advertisement want them to be buyers all the time, and juvenile delinquency increased.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04975124378 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72980681576 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562189054726 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0294710968 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.411764706 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6470588235 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175236566693 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568285501081 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043442746624 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093595962282 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042021691765 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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