Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave. Do you agree or disagree? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Television has become a part of everyday life, insomuch as all family members enjoy watching TV together. In my opinion, I believe that TV shows and movies have had a significant impact on society in many aspects, such as people's behaviors. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, TV is an essential tool to educate people with many crucial skills like communication skills, which means how to behave in certain situations. For instance, there are TV programs that teach people how to behave during job interviews, or how to deals with conflicts between married couples, and the best actions should parents take in problems associated with giving rise to their children. Moreover, movie makers showcase many movies all over the world. Therefore, people in a way are exposed to diverse countries' cultures and learn a lot about their food, rituals, and customs. As a result, if any person has an opportunity to travel aboard either for leisure or to study, he would be familiar with the new country's culture and will behave respectfully to their values.
Secondly, they provide society with a lot of successful models, which inspire people to work hard and achieve their goals in life. There are many movies and television' series that present the biographic drama based on the lives of the most intellectual people in the world. For example, my best friend in college had a disease, which made him so miserable. He thought that he would have no job prospects. However, when he watched the famous movie The Theory of Everything, which the story of Stephen Hawking, the renowned physics scientist and how he got a rare disease as he embarked upon his Ph.D. Even so, Stephen's only concern was to finish his study before he dies. Amazingly, his scientific research was a breakthrough. That movie motivated my friend enormously, and he has a great successful career now.
In conclusion, I reckon that television shows and movies have a beneficial effect on the human being's attitudes. Not only do they educate people about communication skills, but also, they motivate people to work hard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, even so, for example, for instance, i feel, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96388888889 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66759098564 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586111111111 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4757951523 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.117647059 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8823529412 5.45110844103 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133617092246 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454635685783 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321703425452 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089892229773 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248382066908 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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