n today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
The debate on the fast progration on the modern era has it huge impact on people jobs. While some people hold the opinion of it is better to be faster to accomplish your work even if it contain some voids. Others, of course, believes that working slowly with high accuracy. Personally, I agree with the latter for three main reasons.
In todyes world, the excellence of work is the main standar of alots of companies. One important result of working slowly is that the production of high quality task. Apple, for example, had a good repatation among thire compatitive because of a high detail-attantion toward thire devices such as, computers, tablets, and cell phones. Even so they only announce for there product once in a year. Thus, high preformance in work if it is done slowely will end up with pleasure.
Another siginificant result in slow-going work is developing of problem solving skills. While preformaing any type of task , some issue arise during it, if it is handled under great care it will eventually fixed. For instance, if an employee had to work with an electric genritor, which is type of work that should be done carefuly, and this genritor was damaged. The worker rule is to elimante any hazerd before starting to operate, if he rush to swich it on , the sequances with this deciation is most probably fetal. therefore, working slowly will make it easier to deal with sudden arising problem and creat the vision of sloution.
In addition to high standar work production and the issue solving skills benifits with the slow-moving work is the preservation of time. The main issue of working fast is you can make alot of mistakes which mean that you have to correct them over and over again. To illustrate, If a team works on a certain project with deadline and one of the members was really fast but his works is inaccurate. Because of his error, his team will suffer from time wasting and they will not be able to submite thire work.So, the advantage of working slow-motion is less error and more time will be saved.
In conclusion, the modranization has it effect on the todays work. While there are some people likes to work faster with mistakes. I believe, that for they above mention reasons that working slowly is more benificial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, therefore, thus, while, even so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76530612245 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57343384934 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533163265306 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0344157316 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9523809524 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279367042366 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899576467865 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670849920221 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163077723961 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554011986663 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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