Neighbours are inevitable parts for many of peoples. In other words, almost all of us live in a community where some families live near us. Having neighbours with qualities we want in them is not a usual case, because we all are different personalities. However, in my opinion, some important qualities that I want in my neighbour are explored further.
First, a person living next-door must be friendly and loyal. A good and true communication means a healthy relationship. What is better than having a friend who lives next door? If we are alone, want some advice, or spend some time sharing emotions feelings with someone who is near to us, provided that we do not live with a family, than a neighbour is the closest person living near you. Moreover, a loyal neighbour friend can really help out if we are facing some troubles. For example, once me and my family were going to a family road trip and suddenly my father realized that he forgot to switch off the gas stove, which is quite dangerous and can potentially burn our own house. But, thanks to our good old lady neighbour, nothing happened. She went in our house, as she had a spare of our home keys, and switched off the stove. So having a friendly and loyal neighbour is beneficial.
Second, a neighbour should not interfere in personal or family members, if h/she is not related to family in any legal way. We all need some personal space, and same is true with neighbours. When someone interferes in some important decisions that are limited to my family, than a suggestion from an outsider is not a good choice. To illustrate this, when my family lived in the old place, where I was born, a neighbour spread the rumour that my parents fought with each other. As a consequence, many of our neighbours who genuinely cared about my family, came to our house and to settle the dispute. Eventually, my father explained them about the situation and matter was dissolved.
Therefore, the some crucial traits that I look for in a neighbour are truthfulness, friendliness and not too much irritating. I feel satisfied if my neighbours have these qualities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ecisions that are limited to my family, than a suggestion from an outsider is not a ...
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, for example, i feel, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74324324324 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72470637604 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537837837838 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0647774207 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5714285714 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.619047619 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968311144482 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327254244277 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450904404787 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612094923778 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484406979515 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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