Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Due to the overpopulation, cities have become more crowded, and apartments host more people. So, we humans, as social creatures have to live in tighter groups and interact with each other very closely. Neighbors provide good examples of interaction. I suppose that the quality of neighbors would affect people’s lives directly. This essay will explore some qualities of a good neighbor.
First of all, I believe that a good neighbor is who respect to other neighbor’s rights. Someone who makes a lot of noise, throws so many parties, makes everything dirty and so on could not make a good neighbor. Moreover, lobby, roof garden, stairs and elevator are shared spaces of a building, and no one is allowed to employ them as their own place and store their belongings in them. In addition, there are some rules for using parking lots in every building. People, who reside in a block, have to park their vehicles properly and do not bother the other neighbors by occupying their private spaces. Besides, a good neighbor knows that the onus of building is on all residents, including her. Thus, when there is a meeting to solve the blocks problems or something needs to be repaired, she has to take part and help. So, I believe that to accept our responsibilities against our residence would make us a good neighbor.
When it comes to the qualities of a good neighbor, the second feature is to be sensitive and compassionate to other people. Our best neighbor is the one who values us and tries her best to help when we are in an emergency. I think a personal example may shed some light on this opinion. A couple of years ago, a young man of my neighbors had a serious accident, which led him to a very difficult surgery. But, there was only one medical doctor in a private hospital that was able to operate this surgery, and thus a huge amount of money was needed. All that said, the young man was alone and poor, so this was a very unreachable dream to have that much money available. Afterwards, neighbors gathered together and provided the required money. He conquered the operation and survived. Therefore, a good neighbor is always there, and we can count on her in difficult situations.
In conclusion, to interact perfectly with other people especially neighbors is of major importance. Respecting to other people’s rights by being neat and responsible in addition to trying to be by their side in hardships and help them as far as we are able would make us the best neighbors ever.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, as to, i suppose, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7632183908 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76790964825 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542528735632 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8400964756 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279137815583 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897582995945 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736803891076 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177796087375 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376421819604 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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